space story
we have been doing a may road challenge from Annie and hope you like it leave a comment if you find a mistake inside and this is the challenge you have to write these 5 words in a story ,wolf,oxygen,BFF,Kumara,Experience, and this is what I wrote.
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Awesome story Nicholas. I like the way you explained the task too. Maybe next time you could add in more punctuation and explain what you found challenging about the task? Keep up the awesome blogging!
ReplyDeleteHi Nicholas its Jadarose here from room 25, I really liked your blog post about the space story. I like how you put in the story that at the end of the story they grew Kumara. Thanks for sharing your learning with me. You should check out my blog here is a link :odsjadarose.blogspot.com
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kia ora Nicholas its me Jiraiya and I'm next-store in rm 24 I really like your blog post about wolfs and kumara. Have you ever check your sentence so it makes since.
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Hey! Jiraiya it's your 2 BFF Nicholas and thanks for the tip and I did not Kind of looked properly at my work I might blog on you know BLOG YOU LATER
DeleteHey Nicholas, it's me Kody from Room 22. I like your story. I just think you could improve on your full stops and fixing up your sentences. I like looking and reading your story. By Kody Blog ya later! If you want to see my blog heres the link --> http://odskodyt.blogspot.com/.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava, my name is Titan from Room 23 at owairaka school. I really liked your blog post about Space story. I remember doing something like this but in the hard way writing a lot of words!. Have you ever tried something but with a lot of words?. Thanks for sharing your learning with me!. You should check out my blog!
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Hey Titan it's Nicholas from room 25 and no I haven't done something with Heaps of words in it. I'd like to say that thanks for commenting on me I Will look at your blog post you know well BLOG YA LATTER
DeleteTalofa lava, my name is chance for rm 24 at owairaka school. I really liked your blog post about Space story.check out my blog! 20chanceg@owairaka.school.nz Blog you later,😂😂😂😂😂😂😧😧😧😧
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Hello Nichloas it's Richee from rm 7 I like your blog because it's really cool how you but your hard work into this post 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
ReplyDeleteHello Nicholas my name is Luca and I am in Room 22.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post about your story because it is quite hard to do that but it is very interesting what was hard about this?
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Hi Nicholas, My name is Rowena. I like your story because it is creative. SOme feedbacks are that you should add more full stops and a bit more description to your writting. You might want to add a picture and double cheak your writting maybe triple check?
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-Rowena
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